Iron Warrior
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Post by Iron Warrior on Apr 28, 2006 19:49:27 GMT -5
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Post by Ranger Dude on Apr 29, 2006 0:31:11 GMT -5
Interesting. I skimmed through it and noticed it was full of inconsistencies and poorly worded ideas. The base idea isn't bad, and if cleaned up, these could be rather fun. Just needs some serious editing.
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