Feed back on my list for GT09

[generalx]

So this is probably the list I'm bringing, if I make it there. I'm fairly new to 40k in the competitive tourney sense, so this'll be interesting. Anyways any ideas on how this would be comped/its competitiveness?


HQ
Grand master +4 GKT retinue,1x Incinerator 344

TROOPS
5 storm troopers, 2x melta, rhino 120
5 storm troopers, 2x plasma gun, rhino 120
9 Grey Knights, Justicar, 2xincinerator 270

Inducted IG inf. plat.
command +heavy bolter+chimera w/2xheavy bolter 95
10 infantry +missile and grenade launchers +chimera multilas/heavy bolter 120
10 infantry +auto cannon + grenade launcher +chimera multilas heavy bolter 120

HEAVY
Land Raider, Extra armor, searchlights 256
Land Raider, Extra armor, searchlights 256
Dreadnought, multimelta, incinerator, extra armor, smoke 143
1849


so thoughts? any mistakes I made/reccomendations?

[Horst]

you have potential to win games with this list, but i'd say it will probably score poorly in comp because of the 2 land raiders... might wanna drop one for more infantry.

[jay]

Well you got to be carefull with landraiders. in space marine list two landraiders would be too much, but in deamon hunter list it is alot more acceptable. especially if you have two different type of land raiders (lascannons and bolters).

I see you have three of the same Inducted IG squads (autocannons). I would like to see another weapon build out. Maybe heavy bolter or assult weapons in one.

Remember i am only 1 of the 4 judges. For instance i love inducted IG squads, but anohter judge could hate them.

Remember with comp you have to balance comp vs how many games are you going to lose based on it. A great comp army could make you lose 3 out of the 5 games.

[generalx]

Ok, so a little more variety is key?


also as you noted I would like comments on strength and comp, not just comp


edit: so I changed the guard squads up a bit. I can't change the LR because I need the long range AT they can potentially provide (while still moving 6 a turn, woo new LR rules [FAQ]).